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Q As you know, business people are busy. Often, our job is to write messages that are highly readable and accessible so that our readers can understand our messages as quickly and easily as possible. In this exercise, you will work to edit a piece of writing to make it easier for fast reading. Your challenge: Reduce this message by at least 50% while still conveying its intended meaning. Then copy and paste (don't upload an attachment!) your revised version into a discussion post. Reduce this message: 50% Editing Activity.docx Download 50% Editing Activity.docx It will help to: • Vary sentence length • Keep paragraphs short (125 words or fewer) • Focus on one concept per paragraph • Place key ideas at the beginning • Use lists, headings, and subheadings for fast reading • Eliminate redundant words and phrases

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Introduction: I met with the fourth years community psychiatrist doing introductory session. The motive is to look within the community to find any constraints and the defining features of the subject. These psychiatrists were discouraged by the limitations of the studies on the illness management. The nature of the meeting reveals that the recuperation-based treatment has the limitations. The discussion after that revolves around one major fact on how the importance of the community psychiatry matters the most. The concern I have post that why the community psychiatry is needed.